nice
i think the melody sounds great
but i liked the bassline the most(it stood out the most as well
for your first trance song your definately headed in the right direction, though i don't know much about it myself, its much better than my first trance song
i had a couple complaints, one obviously was that it wasn't very long so it didn't really give me a chance to get into it, and second i wasn't a huge fan of the kick or the lead used.....
all in all for 54 seconds it was good though
hope to hear some great stuff from you in the future!
4/5
8/10